Tuesday, 27 August 2019

assignment 2

                                   A day with my friend

It was a day I will never forget when I have met my athlete friend that I have not seen her for 5 years. she came all the way from England to meet up. It was just unbelievable to see her after that long time. After I picked her up from the airport, she decided to go to the gym to train because she never misses a day without training, and for sure I went with her, between I have not been never to the gym. We went there and she started training and I was like you should try something so I started to do a pull-up bar and it was not a good idea, it was way hard for me, so I decided to start a fitness journey and I ended up register in the gym. After she finished her training, we were starving so we decided to go somewhere to eat, on our way to the restaurant, I was talking with her while I was driving, all of sudden there was a cat crossing the street I did not see her and accidentally I run over the cat and she died, we took her to buried it. while I was digging I hit my thumb by mistake and I started to crying, it hurt a lot and it took me a long time to calm down. when we finished we continue our way to the restaurant, we arrived and ordered the food and it was such a delicious food we could not stop eating until we could not even move so we decided to go the longest stairs on my city and work out there we went and we started jumping up down to burn the calories until we got so tired. we have made a decision to go somewhere to relax. we went to my flat and while I went into the door my friend called me and, she called us to have a cup of tea in her house, which is far 5 km from my flat we went there and we knocked the door but she didn't open it, I started to bush the bell many times so she can hear us after ten minutes she opened it she was taking a shower and she apologized to us. After we drank the tea and had such a great conversation about our childhood it was the time to go home. we decided to go home on feet because it was not that far, we walked about 20 min.  we arrived at my flat finally and we made popcorn and put a movie to watch while we were watching my friend went to the kitchen to drink water she called me, I went to check her she was trying hard to take a glass from the shelf because she is way short so she could not get it, I helped her and gave her the glass. when the movie end, we had nothing to do and we were bored, we ended up in the park playing football and we kept on playing and kicking the ball until we got tired and went back home straight to the bed.

1 comment:

  1. Hi!
    You followed the given instructions very well in this assignment! I noticed how you incorporated the pictures on the dice in your story in a very casual way. You went with a very easy-going storyline and did a great job with that. However, there are a couple of things that could use some polishing. First of all, check your grammar. Some sentences sound a little bit confusing and some of them are lacking important structures. It is understandable all the way, but keep an eye on that. Also you could try and use more variation in both your word choices, as well as with your sentence structures. Otherwise you did fine, great job :)

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